I've been following your progress toward the Egyptian legacy for maybe a couple of years now, though I'm not sure I've commented before. I look forward to reading it, eventually, and I'm enjoying this year's Myshuno entries.
One thing: "Those taught sails" should read "taut." (I try to avoid correcting others' writing unless they've asked me to, but that one is bugging me. I hope you don't mind.)
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on 2013-10-05 09:26 pm (UTC)One thing: "Those taught sails" should read "taut." (I try to avoid correcting others' writing unless they've asked me to, but that one is bugging me. I hope you don't mind.)